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I wake up. Rays of light try to break through my eye lids though I keep my eyes shut. I’m afraid of what I’ll see, I don’t remember what happened last night, feel heavily dazed. I shiver, hear nothing, someone put the world on mute. I keep asking myself what happened. I hear a bird screeching. Okay, I’m still alive. Blurry memories of things that passed flash before my eyes. I ask myself what happened. Slowly, I regain consciousness. And then I hear it, a door creeping, distinct foot steps closing. I have to get out of here. I try to get up, fall, get up again, I pull a door open and …
“CRAP”
Ha, I’ve beaten my sister again in the race to the bathroom, it’s Saturday morning.
©2006-2009 ~Brammm
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K, I suddenly felt the urge to write something... Very short story, I might updated it, or just write smth new...
If you notice my english is really crap, let me know, help me correct it and learn me to use better english...

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:iconthe-boink:
loool! shit man thats awesome ... i'm like .. wow i never knew bram could be so deep .. then **BAM** saturday morning and ur sisters bangin the bathroom door down .. lol :+fav:

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J4xx Designs [X]
:iconbrammm:
thx... I liked the surreal feeling of the beginning and then the reality that hits you like a train... I wanted to make it longer, but i ran out of inspiration...

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I rock :headbang:
:iconryu120488:
LOL... so cool... just like the other story...

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Oh well...
:iconnemowei:
lol... your right... i did like it :+fav:

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Thoes who forgive and forget are choosing to be ignorant. You don't get stabbed in the back then hand that person back the knife.
:iconnemowei:
np

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Thoes who forgive and forget are choosing to be ignorant. You don't get stabbed in the back then hand that person back the knife.

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January 14, 2006
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